英語日記 学ぶこと

Learning something might be about observing yourself. In the process of learning, you are forced to see in yourself, what you are good at and what poor at. Improvement will mostly happen when you cope with weakness by trying to rectify it more than repeating what you are already good at. It’s hard because it’s painful to admit how terrible you are when practicing new techniques or knowledge, so we might tend to avoid facing the reality.

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In the process of learning, you are forced to see in yourself, what you are good at and what poor at.

corrections:

In the process of learning, you are forced to look within yourself, and see what you are good at and what you are poor at. (Or "what you are not so good at")

Improvement will mostly happen when you cope with weakness by trying to rectify it more than repeating what you are already good at.

corrections:

Improvement will mostly happen when you accept your weakness by trying to rectify them more than focusing only on what you are already good at. (Or, "focusing only on your strengths.")

It’s hard because it’s painful to admit how terrible you are when practicing new techniques or knowledge, so we might tend to avoid facing the reality.

corrections:

It’s hard because it’s painful to admit how terrible you are when practicing new techniques or acquiring knowledge, so we might tend to avoid facing the truth head-on.