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I’ve come to a bike repair shop to change a front tire and oil of my scooter. Come to think of it, it’s quite rare for me to write about this kind of thing, so this might not make sense.
Anyway, this shop was transferred here from my neighborhood. It’s now more distant from my place, but for some reason I felt lazy to go to another shop near my place. One reason is pricing. The building appears quite shabby, but the workers here, seemingly a father and son, are kind. And to my impressions, the price is probably much lower than other shops although I’ve never scrutinized it.
The reason why they moved here was probably their old shop building was crumbling. It did literally so when it was struck by strong wind.
Now it’s a bother for me to have to come to a longer distance, but I’m happy that they can keep running the business.
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I’ve come to a bike repair shop to change a front tire and oil of my scooter.
corrections:
I’ve come to a bike repair shop to change the front tire and oil of my scooter.
Anyway, this shop was transferred here from my neighborhood.
corrections:
Anyway, this shop relocated here from my neighborhood.
It’s now more distant from my place, but for some reason I felt lazy to go to another shop near my place.
corrections:
It’s now more distant from my place, but for some reason I felt lazy about finding another shop near my place.
And to my impressions, the price is probably much lower than other shops although I’ve never scrutinized it.
corrections:
And to my impressions, the price is probably much lower than other shops; although I’ve never scrutinized it.
The reason why they moved here was probably their old shop building was crumbling.
corrections:
The reason why they moved here was probably that their old shop building was crumbling.
Now it’s a bother for me to have to come to a longer distance, but I’m happy that they can keep running the business.
corrections:
Now, it’s a bother for me to have to come a longer distance, but I’m happy that they can keep running the business.
