empollonの英語とか学習帳

このブログは僕の英語学習の内容や進捗、特に翻訳練習を記録するために始めました。ついでに、面白い人たちとの新たな出会いがあったら、なお嬉しいです。This will be to keep a record of my English practice progress. If I can get to know new interesting people through any interactions here, that’s also nice

英語日記 オリンピックについて思うこと

Out of what I’ve heard about IOC recently, I began to think that the Olympic is nothing different from the fighting of gladiators at the colosseum in the age of Ancient Rome.

最近IOCについて聞いたことから、オリンピックって古代ローマ時代に、コロッセオでやっていた剣闘士たちの闘いと何も変わらないなと考えるようになった。

 

Aristocrats and wealthy spectators would enjoy watching bloody fights over the death of slave fighters.

貴族や富裕層たちは、奴隷闘士たちの死をかけた血の闘いを観て楽しんだものだ。

 

This time, IOC members seem so hungry for life and blood of Japanese citizens.

今回は、IOCメンバーは日本国民の生命と血に飢えているようだ。

 

They will enjoy partying while watching the suffering of common people by the spread of infections as well as the games of honor-blinded athletes.

誇りに盲目となったアスリートたち、さらには感染拡大による一般人たちの苦しみを眺めながら、彼らはパーティーを楽しむことだろう。

 

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Out of what I’ve heard about IOC recently, I began to think that the Olympic is nothing different from the fighting of gladiators at the colosseum in the age of Ancient Rome.

Corrections:

From what I’ve heard about the IOC recently, I’ve begun to think that the Olympic games are not different from the fighting of gladiators at the colosseum in the age of Ancient Rome.

 

Aristocrats and wealthy spectators would enjoy watching bloody fights over the death of slave fighters.

Corrections:

Aristocrats and wealthy spectators would enjoy watching slaves’ bloody fights to the death.

 

This time, IOC members seem so hungry for life and blood of Japanese citizens.

Corrections:

This time, IOC members seem so hungry for the lives and blood of Japanese citizens.

 

They will enjoy partying while watching the suffering of common people by the spread of infections as well as the games of honor-blinded athletes.

corrections:

They will enjoy partying while watching the suffering of common people by the spread of infections as well as the games of athletes, blinded by honor.