英語日記 今日は休み

Today, I took a day off. I woke up late. I was thinking of going out to a clinic and a pool in the afternoon, but I changed my mind and went to a pool after late breakfast. Now I’m already back home from there.

As for my strange throat condition, lately I’ve been feeling like the entire part around my neck got swollen as well as something wrong inside the throat. Yesterday, I realized that my neck in fact looked pretty swollen. Now I wonder if that has something to do with my clogging sensation of throat. I might simply have gotten fatter so the added flesh presses inward, which gives me this sensation. Is it possible? This theory sounds unlikely. But, I stopped eating candies that I mentally relied on so much after quitting smoking.

Another alleged cause of this symptom is the English pronunciation practice that I started a couple weeks ago. I’ve practice it like every day for a while. When I did, I was aware of a lot of strain on my throat because that method of practice required a different way of breathing. It’s unfortunate that my throat might not be very suitable for English pronunciation, or I just made mistakes in some part in practice.

Anyway, I’m thinking of reading after lunch until the clinic is open for afternoon consultations.

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I woke up late.

corrections:

So, I woke up late.

I was thinking of going out to a clinic and a pool in the afternoon, but I changed my mind and went to a pool after late breakfast.

corrections:

I was thinking of going to a clinic and a pool in the afternoon, but I changed my mind and went to the pool after a late breakfast.

As for my strange throat condition, lately I’ve been feeling like the entire part around my neck got swollen as well as something wrong inside the throat.

corrections:

As for my strange throat condition, I’ve been feeling like the entire area around my neck is swollen and there’s also something wrong inside my throat lately.

I might simply have gotten fatter so the added flesh presses inward, which gives me this sensation.

corrections:
I might simply have gotten fatter so the added fat presses inward, which gives me this sensation.

Is it possible?

 Corrections:

Is that possible?

But, I stopped eating candies that I mentally relied on so much after quitting smoking.

corrections:

But, I stopped eating candies that I mentally relied on so much after I quit smoking.

Another alleged cause of this symptom is the English pronunciation practice that I started a couple weeks ago.

corrections:

Another alleged cause of this symptom is the English pronunciation practice that I’ve started a couple weeks ago.

I’ve practice it like every day for a while.

corrections:

I’ve been practicing it like every day for a while.

When I did, I was aware of a lot of strain on my throat because that method of practice required a different way of breathing.

corrections:

Whenever I did it, I was aware of a lot of strain on my throat because that method of practice required a different way of breathing.

It’s unfortunate that my throat might not be very suitable for English pronunciation, or I just made mistakes in some part in practice.

corrections:

It’s unfortunate that my throat might not be very suitable for English pronunciation, or I just made mistakes when practicing.

Anyway, I’m thinking of reading after lunch until the clinic is open for afternoon consultations.

corrections:

Anyway, I’m thinking of doing some reading after lunch until the clinic is open for the afternoon consultations.